对于考研英语一而言，2014年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of rural and urban popularity in China during twenty years. In 1990, the number of urban popularity was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural popularity experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system in cities, enalling people who used to live in rural to have ample opportunities to work and live in urban. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to learning and living in cities and have become the primary popularity group.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban popularity is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural popularity will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：opulari

批改：populations

原文：pula

批改：population

原文：opula

批改：population

原文：picts the changes of rural and urban popularity in China during twenty years. In 1990, the number of urban popularity was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural popularity experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same per

批改：数据比较准确，描述图表比较到位，有对比，有论述，句子写的比较符合语法规则，注意单词写错了

原文：alli

批改：enabling

原文：ural

批改：rural是adj，后面要加名词，in rural area

原文：an

批改：in urban area

原文：pular

批改：population

原文：hestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system in cities, enalling people who used to live in rural to have ample opportunities to work and live in urban. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to learning and living in cities and have become the primary popularity group

批改：原因分析大致上比较贴合主题，内容比较丰富详尽，句子结构合理。

原文：popularity

批改：population

原文：opul

批改：population

原文：elatively stable

批改：删掉

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8/15

语法：语法上注意词性的用法哦，adj修饰名词，注意decrease是动词，后面可以加名词，但不能仅仅加adj

逻辑：逻辑整体上还是比较OK的，比较有层次感。

词汇：单词拼错的很多哦，这个popularity贯穿全文哦，这属于key word，一定不能错的，注意修改，加强记忆。

内容：结构还是不错的，内容比较贴合图表主题，句子的语法和词汇存在一些问题哦，要加强记忆。

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