据启航教育英语教研组统计，考研英语作文批改话题连续多年成为考研英语二大作文的高频考点。本文带来的2014年考研英语二批改例文中，考生通过对社会热点的精准分析与地道表达，获得高分，其写作思路可供2027考研英语二考生直接借鉴。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban and rural populations in China during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to around 670 million. In contrast, the rural population experienced a slow decline of about 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system in cities, enabling rural residents to have ample opportunities to find jobs in urban areas. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, rural residents are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue a higher quality of life. This explains why an increasing number of them choose to live in cities. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

原文：670

批改：题目中已经给出了数字，写为 666

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，表达也不错

批改：内容表达不错，也比较具体

批改：结尾段内容表达不错，预测也很合理

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：不存在语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：注意数字表达的准确性，图表中已经标出的数字直接使用即可。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，试着多用自己的话来写，总的来说写的不错，加油！

复习考研英语大作文，务必要重视范文精读+专业批改的双向结合。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，专为冲刺阶段考生打造，从话题预测到写作模板一应俱全，是考研英语作文批改写作提分的可靠方案。