本文是一份经过启航教育整理的2015年考研英语二大作文批改资料，对照考研英语作文万能句型写作框架与评分标准进行精细讲解。无论是词汇句式、段落衔接还是逻辑展开，本文都能为考研英语考生提供可直接套用的范例。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the prportion in spring Festival abort a Chinese city residents cost.The New year "s gift takes the lead at 40%.Additionally Such as Dinner Party and transpotation account for the same proportion, 20%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To Start with,our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the puchasing power of the populace allowing them to afford many gifts the were previously deemed luxury items.To addition,In the wake of the high-speed advantage of society people"s attitudes towards of consumption have undergone Significant change.This is explains why

Increasing number of people choose buy many New Year"s gift for their fiend and parents.Considering these factors the depicted phenpmenon in the chart unsurprising.

What obout future tends? I am confidant that the proportion of New Year"s gift will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrst, the number proportion of dinner party 、transportation and else will likely continue to remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：the prportion in spring Festival abort a Chinese city residents cost

批改：注意多个名词表达的顺序问题，改为 different expenses during the Spring Festival for residents

原文：Additionally

批改：加逗号

原文：Such as

批改：删去，此处应该是一个完整的句子

原文：Dinner Party and transpotation

批改：改为 transportation, gatherings and dining, and other expenses

批改：图表的内容要表达完整

原文：Start

批改：此处首字母不大写

原文：populace

批改：加逗号

批改：语法正确

原文：To

批改：注意固定搭配，此处为 In

原文：In

批改：此处首字母不大写

原文：advantage

批改：此处应该为 advancement

原文：society

批改：加逗号

原文：of

批改：删去，已经有 towards 了

原文：Significant change

批改：可数名词单数形式不能单独存在，改为 a significant change

原文：Increasing

批改：固定搭配，改为 an increasing

原文：choose

批改：choose to do sth, 改为 choose to

原文：gift

批改：此处为复数 gifts

原文：fiend

批改：friends

原文：factors

批改：加逗号

原文：phenpmenon

批改：phenomenon

原文：unsurprising

批改：句子缺少动词，改为 is unsurprising

批改：内容表达不错，多注意语法问题

原文：obout

批改：about

原文：tends

批改：trends

原文：confidant

批改：confident

原文：gift

批改：改为 gifts

原文：number

批改：删去

原文：else

批改：此处为名词，可改为 other expenses

批改：结尾段内容表达不错，多注意语法和拼写问题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在一些语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心 3. 标点使用和首字母大小写要规范，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，加油！

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