对于考研英语一而言，2015年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different expenses in Spring Festival for residents in a certain city in China. The New Year gifts take the lead at a 40%, followed by transportations, gathering and dinning and others at 2.0% .

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

To start with ，as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevating the purchasing power of populace, allowing them to afford New year gifts that were deemed previously luxury items. In addition, as the saying goes: "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, people are compelled to confront immense pressure from society, and as a result, gatherings and dinning have become their significant choice for utilizing New Year time. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising .

What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures acurately reflect the choices of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：transportations

批改：应为 “transportation”（不可数名词）

原文：gathering and dinning

批改：“gatherings and dining”（复数 + 动名词正确形式）

原文：elevating

批改：应为 “elevate”（与 “drive” 并列，用原形）

原文：acurately

批改：应为 “accurately”

原文：deemed previously

批改：语序错误，应为 “previously deemed”

原文：a

批改：删去

原文：he purchasing power of populace

批改：缺少定冠词，应为 “the purchasing power of the populace”

原文：he pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different expenses in Spring Festival for residents in a certain city in China. The New Year gifts take the lead at a 40%, followed by transportations, gathering and dinning and others at 2.0% .

批改：描述图片内容，符合题目要求

原文：e core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with ，as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevating the purchasing power of populace, allowing them to afford New year gifts that were deemed previously luxury items. In addition, as the saying goes: "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, people are compelled to confront immense pressure from society, and as a result, gatherings and dinning have become their significant choice for utilizing New Year time. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising .

批改：使用了表示逻辑关系的连接词，条理清晰

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures acurately reflect the choices of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：推测未来的趋势，符合结尾段的内容和结构

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11

这篇围绕 “某城市居民春节消费支出占比” 的饼图分析文，具备完整框架，能精准捕捉 “新年礼物占比最高” 的核心数据，主题明确。但存在语法拼写错误，加强单词的背诵。希望继续努力，加油！

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