启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2014年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语二真题备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

北京考区

This bar chart clearly depicts the chang of urban and rural population from1990 to 2010 in China.In 1990,the urban population was 300 million,but by 2010,this figure has significant increased to 666 million.In contrast,rural population experienced a slowly decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for this observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the rural populace,allowing them to afford urban house that previously were deemed luxury items.In addition,an increasing number of young people,particulary those born in the 1970s and 1990s,believe that in morden society full of changes,challenges and chances.Living in the city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.

What about future trends?I believe the urban population is a clear sign of social advancement,and will likely keep increaseing in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： chang

批改：change

原文：population

批改：此处为复数 populations

原文：significant

批改：副词修饰动词，改为 significantly

原文：rural

批改：改为 the rural

原文：slowly

批改：此处的 decline 是名词，形容词修饰名词，改为 slow

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，内容表达也很好

批改：此处都是从句的内容，改为逗号

原文：Living

批改：前面改为逗号后，此处首字母不大写

原文：the city

批改：改为复数更合理 cities

批改：内容表达不错，也比较具体

原文： house

批改：可数名词单数形式不能单独存在，且从句的动词为 were, 此处改为 houses

原文：increaseing

批改：increasing

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心 3. 标点使用和首字母大小写要规范，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，试着多用自己的话来写，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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