正在备考考研英语的你，是否还在为2014年考研英语二大作文的写法犯愁？本文精选一篇高分组同学的批改例文，系统梳理考研英语作文话题的常考话题与写作框架。透过启航教育老师的逐段点评，你能直观感受高分作文的得分诀窍。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the varity of the population of city and countryside during 20 years. In 1990,the number of the population of countryside was 834 million, but by 2010, this figure had substaintially decreased to 674 million. In contrast, the number of city population experienced a significant increase of 366 million from 1990 to 2010.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of the changes, our government has made sound education system, enabling countryside population"s children to have ample opportunity for futher education. In additon, as the saying goes,"" On life"s stage, pressure is always present."" Nowadays, countryside population are compelled to immerse life pressure,and as a result, going to work in city has emerged as their significant choice.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population will steadily increase. In contrast, the number of countryside population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：varity

批改：variety

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the varity of the population of city and countryside during 20 years. In 1990,the number of the population of countryside was 834 million, but by 2010, this figure had substaintially decreased to 674 million. In contrast, the number of city population experienced a significant increase of 366 million from 1990 to 2010.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：reason

批改：reasons

原文：population"s

批改：这里用人口就不合适了，因为不能说人口的孩子，应该改成：people"s

原文：futher

批改：further或future

原文：population

批改：people

原文： immerse

批改：confront immense被迫面对沉重的生活压力

原文：he core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of the changes, our government has made sound education system, enabling countryside population"s children to have ample opportunity for futher education. In additon, as the saying goes,"" On life"s stage, pressure is always present."" Nowadays, countryside population are compelled to immerse life pressure,and as a result, going to work in city has emerged as their significant choice.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population will steadily increase. In contrast, the number of countryside population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，注意名词单复数的正确选取，以及注意区分形近单词；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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