备战2014年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语二写作高分规划。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban and rural populations in China during the 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decine of 160 million during the same time.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to go from rural to urban. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, rural residents are no longer content with mere material satisfaction, they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an inceasing number of rural residents choose to live in cities.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：decine

批改：decline

原文：of

批改：in

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban and rural populations in China during the 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decine of 160 million during the same time.

批改：清晰描述了图表清晰

原文：reason

批改：下面有两个原因，用复数

原文：to go from rural to urban

批改： to move from rural to urban areas

原文：,

批改：中间加and或者用句号

原文：inceasing

批改： ​​increasing

原文：The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to go from rural to urban. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, rural residents are no longer content with mere material satisfaction, they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an inceasing number of rural residents choose to live in cities.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：语法结构丰富

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，考试使保持这样的结构；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，非谓语结构和宾语从句变化使用，体现了英语水平；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯，老师评卷时会非常喜欢；

4.根据自己的基础，要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，写作和背诵相结合，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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