考研英语写作模板命题趋势越来越关注社会热点与考生思辨能力。本文带来的2014年考研英语二批改范例，透过图表/图画深挖现象背后的本质，由启航教育老师逐段精批，可帮助考生建立稳定的考研英语写作思维框架。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

2014年(大作文)

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban people and rural people in China for 20 years. In 1990, the number of wurban people was 300 million. but for 2010. the figure hads substanially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural people experitenced a slow decline during the same period. The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating o the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive ecomonic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford house that were previouslly deemed luxury items. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment .This explains why an increasing number of people choose the urban rather than traditional rural life.

Considering these factors, the depited phenomenon in the chart is unsurpring.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：wurban

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 urban

原文：hads

批改：单词错误，改为 had

原文：substanially

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 substantially

原文：experitenced

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 experienced

原文：o

批改：删除

原文：ecomonic

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 economic

原文：house

批改：根据语境，改为复数 houses

原文：previouslly

批改：单词拼写错误，改为previously

原文：depited

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 depicted

原文：unsurpring.

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 unsurprising

批改：逗号

原文：for

批改：介词使用错误， by 表示到了某个时间节点

原文：urban

批改： urban是形容词，后面要跟名词 life

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10 /15

从结构层面看，本文分段不清晰，描述图表，进行分析，最后没有总结段或者合理推测；

从内容层面看，第二段的分析原因比较切题，内容丰富具体；

从语言层面看，单词拼写和语法上有一些错误，影响评分

建议：检查单词拼写，检查语法常识：介词搭配、可数名词加冠词或者变复数、形容词没有修饰对象。自己多练练句子，进一步提高自己的表达，加油！

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