本文是一份经过启航教育整理的2014年考研英语二大作文批改资料，对照考研英语作文话题写作框架与评分标准进行精细讲解。无论是词汇句式、段落衔接还是逻辑展开，本文都能为考研英语考生提供可直接套用的范例。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of countryside and urban"s population in recent 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban’s population is 300 million. by 2000, the figure had substantially risen to 458 million, and by 2010, it has reached to 666 million. Meanwhile, the number of countryside"s population experienced a significant decline about 160 million during the same period from 1990 to 2010.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the imbalance of the development between the city and countryside. In addition, An increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, selecting a big city is a good cholce if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of the urban"s population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of the coutryside"s population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

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批改：删除，reach是及物动词 不需加介词

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of countryside and urban"s population in recent 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban’s population is 300 million. by 2000, the figure had substantially risen to 458 million, and by 2010, it has reached to 666 million. Meanwhile, the number of countryside"s population experienced a significant decline about 160 million during the same period from 1990 to 2010.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the imbalance of the development between the city and countryside. In addition, An increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, selecting a big city is a good cholce if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of the urban"s population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of the coutryside"s population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：首段简洁描述图表核心数据，突出城乡人口变化趋势。中间段分析变化原因，包括经济发展、城市基础设施优势等，同时指出城市化带来的问题。尾段提出政府应采取措施缓解城市化负面影响，体现对社会问题的关注。

整体来看，主要是细节错误， 要多用自己的语言去进行表达，避免和范文重复，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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