备战2010年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语一写作高分规划。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon,there is a boiling hot pot,filled with many culture elements,induding Laoshe，Shakespare,fo, Kongfu and so on. Evidently,the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is culture fusion that plays an significant and positive role in both our personal live and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.First and foremost,Cucture fusion can ignate our creativity and promote personal growth and self fulfillment，thus making life rewarding and meaningful,rather than being self-consuming.What is more, in modern society full ofchanges.and challenges attaching importance of cultural exchanges and learning advanced cultures have become key factors that distinguish exceptional individuals from ordinary people,and the influence significance has heen become increasingly evident.

In brief，Culture fusion is the catalyst for societal and personal development，from which we all stand to benefit.There for,we should actively promote and carry forward culture fusion.Only by doing so can we build a more harmonious society.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：culture

批改：此处为形容词，改为 cultural

原文：induding

批改：including

原文： Laoshe

批改：注意书写规范 Lao She

原文：Shakespare

批改： Shakespeare

原文：Kongfu

批改：kung fu

原文：culture

批改：此处为形容词，改为 cultural

原文：an

批改：此处为 a

原文：live

批改：此处为复数，改为 lives

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的

批改：语法正确

原文：Cucture

批改：cultural

原文：self fulfillment

批改：记得加连接词，改为 self-fulfillment

原文：ignate

批改：ignite

原文：ofchanges.

批改：of changes

原文：of

批改：固定搭配，此处为 to

原文： the influence

批改：改为 their

批改：内容表达不错，也比较具体

原文：Culture

批改：改为 cultural

原文：There for

批改：Therefore

原文：culture

批改：改为 cultural

批改：结尾段表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写错误，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心 3. 首字母大小写要规范。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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