思想品质、教育文化是考研英语大作文的高频命题方向，本文呈现的2019年考研英语二批改范例正是聚焦这一主旨。启航教育老师透过文章结构、衔接表达和结尾升华三方面，逐段展示了一篇考研英语作文真题范文高分范文的诞生过程。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

请在各题目的答题区域内作答,超出答题区域的答案无效 Section IV Writing Part B 48.

As the column chart explicitly mirrors the changes about options among graduates in a certain university from 2013 to 2018. In 2013, the majority of the graduates prefer to look for occuptions. By 2018, an increasing number of graduates were more likely to further education. Simutaneously, the number of the graduates choose to creativity remain steady.

The core reason for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conduct orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous effort to provide financal support to university students, allowing them to purse further education. What"s more, against the backdrop of rapid and dynamic development, people are no longer content with a career, but pursue mental satisfaction. Further education is one of the most prioroptions. Last but not least, in my veiw, the obvious phenomenon is the signifcent progress made by educational policy in respond to changes. In a sum, the phenomenon is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the propartion of the graduats choose further education will experice a surge. At the same time, the praportion of graduates look for careers will remain decrease.

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：As th

批改：as是连词，后跟的是从句，你这里缺少主语，不如把as删掉，变成一个简单句。

原文：ref

批改：preferred

原文： furth

批改：to go further education

原文：utaneo

批改：Simultaneously

原文：ose to creat

批改：choosing to start a business

原文：ain

批改：remained

原文：niversity from 2013 to 2018. In 2013, the majority of the graduates prefer to look for occuptions. By 2018, an increasing number of graduates were more likely to further education. Simutaneously, the number of the graduates choose to creativity remain steady.

批改：描述图表还是比较顺畅的，数据清楚明确，句子结构比较完整，但是表述存在一些问题，比如语法，比如词汇。

原文：ason

批改：加s

原文：uct

批改：conductor

原文：fo

批改：加s

原文：h a caree

批改：逻辑不是很自洽哎，有点Chinglish

原文：prioroptions

批改：是不是想写prior 和options，中间要留空格哦

原文：nifce

批改：significant

原文：ond

批改：responding

原文：more, against the backdrop of rapid and dynamic development, people are no longer content with a career, but pursue mental satisfaction. Further education is one of the most prioroptions. Last but not least, in my veiw, the obvious phenomenon is the signifcent progress made by educational policy in respond to changes. In a sum, the phenomenon is unsurprising.

批改：整体比较符合现实和题意，句子结构比较中规中矩，有些表述Chinglish，考生需要多阅读原汁原味的英文文章哦，语法错的比较多哦。

原文：parti

批改：proportion

原文：uats choos

批改：graduates choosing further

原文：erice

批改：experience

原文：porti

批改：proportion

原文：ok for car

批改：looking

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

语法：语法注意句子的成分不能乱哦，要严格按照语法规则，表述要严谨，用什么句型，用什么单词，怎么用，这些都需要多加练习哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，但是有错的哦，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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