对于考研英语一而言，2013年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart which is give above compared the proportion of college students taking part-time jobs in a certain university, manifesting that college students tend to be more inclined to take part-time jobs. In the first year of university, the percent of students taking part-time jobs was 67.77%, but by the second year of university, this rate had gradually risen up to 71.13%. In contrast, the proportion of students taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the third year to the fourth year.

From my perspective, the core reasons for the above-mentioned phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, in addition to study, college students seek for their suitable part-time jobs according to their own interests to enrich their university life. Furthermore, nowadays, college students are in a rough situation of employment pressure. Faced with fierce competiton, they are forced to find their own direction for survival and development in society by taking part-time jobs in advance. Owing to these factors, the data presented in the bar chart is easy to understand.

The tendency that the booming rate of college students taking part-time jobs will continually play a critical role in our university life.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：ive

批改：given

原文：ared

批改：不用过去式，一般现在时即可，compares

原文：cen

批改：percentage

原文：up

批改：risen to即可

原文：give above compared the proportion of college students taking part-time jobs in a certain university, manifesting that college students tend to be more inclined to take part-time jobs. In the first year of university, the percent of students taking part-time jobs was 67.77%, but by the second year of university, this rate had gradually risen up to 71.13%. In contrast, the proportion of students taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the third year to the fourth yea

批改：第一段描述的还是不错的，数据清楚明确，句子结构完整，内容符合题意，注意一些小错误哦

原文：ccording to their own interests to enrich their university life. Furthermore, nowadays, college students are in a rough situation of employment pressure. Faced with fierce competiton, they are forced to find their own direction for survival and development in society by taking part-time jobs in advance. Owing to these factors, the data presented in the bar chart is easy to understand.

批改：写的不错，内容丰富充实，比较有深度，与现实比较相近，句子比较符合语法规则。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

语法：语法上注意被动语态不能写错哦，时态一般用现在时即可，固定搭配需要注意哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，第二段很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，注意一些词汇使用的适当性哦。

内容：内容比较符合英文作文写作要求，结构合理。

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