2014年考研英语二大作文是启航考研英语备考清单中的必练题型。本文带来的高分批改范例，配套启航教育老师的逐句批注与预测话题标签，适合考研英语考生在冲刺阶段精读精练，是一套完整的写作提升资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the population of urban and rural in China during two decades. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure had significant visen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural popuation experienced a slow decrease of 160 million during the same period.

The aore reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, require experience in big urban areas is dispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s economic improvement in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am comfident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：significant visen

批改：significantly risen 副词修饰动词

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the population of urban and rural in China during two decades. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure had significant visen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural popuation experienced a slow decrease of 160 million during the same period.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：aore

批改：core

原文：require

批改：删除

原文：dispensable

批改：indispensable 这里要表达的是“不可缺少的，绝对必要的”

原文：The aore reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, require experience in big urban areas is dispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s economic improvement in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：What about future trends? I am comfident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：首段简洁描述图表核心数据，突出城乡人口变化趋势。中间段分析变化原因，包括经济发展、城市基础设施优势等，同时指出城市化带来的问题。尾段提出政府应采取措施缓解城市化负面影响，体现对社会问题的关注。

整体来看，主要是细节错误，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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