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一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the direction of students after graduation at a certain university in 2013 and 2018.In 2013, the percentage of working was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate had substantially decrease to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of choosing further study experienced a significant increase of 7.7% during the same from 2013 to 2018.Simultaneously, the percentage of build their own business remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes,challenges, and chances, study is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of choosing further study will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of choosing to work will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：decrease

批改：decreased​​

原文：same

批改：same period

原文：build

批改：​​build​​ing/ starting

原文：direction

批改：太抽象，choices就可以

原文：working

批改：choosing to work 更自然

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the direction of students after graduation at a certain university in 2013 and 2018.In 2013, the percentage of working was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate had substantially decrease to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of choosing further study experienced a significant increase of 7.7% during the same from 2013 to 2018.Simultaneously, the percentage of build their own business remained stable and steady.

批改：描述清晰，注意语法错误

原文：study

批改：​​pursuing further study​​ 更自然

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes,challenges, and chances, study is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：论据充分，语法结构丰富

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of choosing further study will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of choosing to work will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，考试使保持这样的结构；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，非谓语结构和宾语从句变化使用，体现了英语水平；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯，老师评卷时会非常喜欢；

4.根据自己的基础，要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，写作和背诵相结合，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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