考研英语一真题每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2010年考研英语一批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot-pot, filled with culture factors, including kung fu, Lao she, Shakespeare and so on. Evidently, the cartoonist intend to convey to readers that it is cultural intergration that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, cultural intergnation holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial comnerstone for boosting overall national strengh. further propelling social stability and sustainable development. On the other hand, neglecting culture iniergration is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress, not only hidering its ability to maintain heaithy and rapid growth, but also significan-tly affecting its international competitiveness

In brief, culture intergration is the scataiust for societal and personal development, from which we ail stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate practice. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：she

批改：She

原文：intend

批改：intends单三

原文：intergration

批改：integration

原文：s shown in the cartoon, there is a hot-pot, filled with culture factors, including kung fu, Lao she, Shakespeare and so on. Evidently, the cartoonist intend to convey to readers that it is cultural intergration that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：intergnation

批改：integration

批改：逗号

原文：iniergration

批改：

原文：hidering

批改：hindering

原文：heaithy

批改：healthy

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, cultural intergnation holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial comnerstone for boosting overall national strengh. further propelling social stability and sustainable development. On the other hand, neglecting culture iniergration is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress, not only hidering its ability to maintain heaithy and rapid growth, but also significan-tly affecting its international competitiveness

批改：论述的内容较为全面，运用逻辑关系词使得句与句之间衔接较为紧密。注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：intergration

批改：

原文：scataiust

批改：catalyst

原文：ail

批改：all

原文：practice

批改：this practice

原文：In brief, culture intergration is the scataiust for societal and personal development, from which we ail stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate practice. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误；句式方面，注意句子结构的完整；语法方面，注意主谓一致问题。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节性错误会更好。继续加油。

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