考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2011年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二真题话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

According to the given chart, from 2008 to 2009, the market share of Chinese brand cars increased from 26% to 33%.Meanwhile, the Japanese brands in market share experienced a decline, from 35% to26%.During the same period, there was only a slight change (from11% to 11.5%) in American brands.

There are many reasons for this result but the major causes are as follows:

For one thing, thanks to our national endeavor, our country has made great achievements in the auto market and can better suit citizens" growing demand for vehicle performances. For another, with the living standard improving rapidly, people now pursue a colorful life and are more willing to buy cost-effective Chinese brand cars.

From the above discussion, we may come to the conclusion that Chinese automakers will consistently guarantee high quality and this trend will certainly maintain for quite a while in the years ahead.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：From the above discussion, we may come to the conclusion that Chinese automakers will consistently guarantee high quality and this trend will certainly maintain for quite a while in the years ahead.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

原文：According to the given chart, from 2008 to 2009, the market share of Chinese brand cars increased from 26% to 33%.Meanwhile, the Japanese brands in market share experienced a decline, from 35% to26%.During the same period, there was only a slight change (from11% to 11.5%) in American brands.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：There are many reasons for this result but the major causes are as follows: For one thing, thanks to our national endeavor, our country has made great achievements in the auto market and can better suit citizens" growing demand for vehicle performances. For another, with the living standard improving rapidly, people now pursue a colorful life and are more willing to buy cost-effective Chinese brand cars.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：在第二段分析原因时，我们可以有两个选择，一是只分析中国品牌占比上升的原因，二是可以加上日本品牌占比下降的原因，关于日本品牌占比下降的原因，可以写日本品牌一些不当行为导致其声誉下降，进而影响其销量等原因。

整体来看，没有细节错误，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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