历年考研英语大作文命题往往聚焦社会、经济、文化与教育等核心话题。本文精解的2014年考研英语二真题，正是考研英语写作冲刺常考方向中的代表题。透过启航老师逐段批注，可帮助考生建立稳定的写作思路。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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The bar chat depicts the changes of urban population and rural population of China in the last 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was approximately 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantically risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s rapidly economic development in responding to these changes. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, good education is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in sh the long run. Urban educational resources are more abandant and better than rural area. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will still steadily increasin the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely to continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：chat

批改：chart

原文： in the last

批改：over the past

原文：substantically

批改：substantially

原文：The bar chat depicts the changes of urban population and rural population of China in the last 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was approximately 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantically risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：较准确描述了图表内容

原文：chinese

批改：首字母大写

原文：abandant

批改：abundant

原文：area

批改：复数than that in rural areas

原文：increasin

批改：increase in

原文： to

批改：删除to

原文：sh

批改：删除

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s rapidly economic development in responding to these changes. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, good education is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in sh the long run. Urban educational resources are more abandant and better than rural area. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：论点清晰，注意拼写错误

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will still steadily increasin the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely to continue to decrease.

批改：预测趋势，呼应主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/20分。

1. 题目要求：作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，注意拼写错误，这样失分很可惜的；

2. 语言表达：运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，伴随状语，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3. 行文逻辑：采用恰当的衔接手法，行为流畅，内容连贯；

4. 建议：要深刻吃透老师的模板，使用自己的语言，灵活运用在各类题目中，进一步丰富自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

很多考研英语考生都遇到过写作时思路枯竭、句式单一的问题，本文精解的2014年考研英语二范文正是突破这一瓶颈的优质范本。启航教育写作主讲会针对考研英语二常考话题逐一拆解，让考研英语写作冲刺写作变得有迹可循。