一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2021年考研英语一批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语一作文真题教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2021年考研英语一大作文题目

考研英语一2021年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should1)describe the picture briefly, 2)interpret the implied meaning, and 3)give your comments. Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、2021年考研英语一大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a young boy wearing costume and saying to his father, “Dad, many of my classmates think that learing to perform opera is not fun.” While the boy’s father replies, “It is enough if you like it yourself.” Evidently , the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is sticking to oneself that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, sticking to oneself can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, in modern society full of changes, chances, and challenges, sticking to oneself has become a key quality that distinguishes exceptional individuals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident.

In brief, sticking to oneself is the catalyst for personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively advocate and support this practice. Only by doing so can we develop individual potential, fulfill our aspirations and create a heppier life.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：wearing costume

批改：缺少冠词（“costume” 为可数名词，此处指 “一套戏服”，应为 “wearing a costume”）

原文：learing

批改：拼写错误（应为 “learning”）

原文：perform opera

批改：“learn opera”（“学习戏曲” 常用表达）

原文：the

批改：冠词换为a

原文：heppier

批改：拼写错误（应为 “happier”）

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there is a young boy wearing costume and saying to his father, “Dad, many of my classmates think that learing to perform opera is not fun.” While the boy’s father replies, “It is enough if you like it yourself.” Evidently , the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is sticking to oneself that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：描述了图片内容，符合题目要求

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, sticking to oneself can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, in modern society full of changes, chances, and challenges, sticking to oneself has become a key quality that distinguishes exceptional individuals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident.

批改：提出了自己的观点，条理清晰

原文：In brief, sticking to oneself is the catalyst for personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively advocate and support this practice. Only by doing so can we develop individual potential, fulfill our aspirations and create a heppier life.

批改：结尾升华主题，符合结尾段的内容和结构

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15

这篇图画分析文围绕 “坚持自己的爱好” 展开，框架完整，立意积极，能准确捕捉漫画的核心寓意。但存在以下可优化点：部分拼写与语法错误（如 “learing”“heppier”“wearing costume”），影响表达精准度。写完可以整体检查一遍，希望继续努力，加油！

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