2016年考研英语二大作文围绕哪一类话题命题？本文精选的范文聚焦考研英语二作文范文话题方向，结合启航教育多年考研英语二教学沉淀，从描述图表、解读寓意到发表评论三大角度，完整呈现高分作文的内在结构。

一、考研英语二2016年大作文题目

考研英语二2016年大作文Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、考研英语二2016年大作文批改例文

This pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the purposes of traveling among students at a university. Enjoying the scenery takes the lead at 37%, followed by relaxation at 33%. Additionally, factors such as making friends, cultivating ability, and other reasons are also considered, accounting for 9%, 6%, and 15% respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes, "on life’s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, traveling has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. What’s more, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, the ability of independent interpersonal interaction is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：This pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the purposes of traveling among students at a university. Enjoying the scenery takes the lead at 37%, followed by relaxation at 33%. Additionally, factors such as making friends, cultivating ability, and other reasons are also considered, accounting for 9%, 6%, and 15% respectively.

批改：数据描述准确

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes, "on life’s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, traveling has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. What’s more, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, the ability of independent interpersonal interaction is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：原因这段也挺好的

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

题目要求：第一段清晰、准确地描述了图表中的各项数据；第二段深入分析了现象背后的两个主要原因；第三段对未来的趋势做出了合理的判断。完全符合题目要求。

语言表达：文章语言功底扎实。词汇丰富且运用得当，句式结构多变，能够自然、恰当地引用谚语来支撑论点，极大地增强了文章的说服力和文采。没有明显的语法和拼写问题。

行文逻辑：文章按照描述图表、分析原因、预测未来的顺序展开，结构清晰。从描述图表到分析原因，再到预测未来，文章中的过渡较为自然。

建议：同学这篇文章完成度很好，不难看出私下有积累一些好词好句，也建议同学尽快将这些好词好句内化为自己的，多练习积累手感和语感，一定要坚持自己写作文，自己写完之后再去借鉴范文，学习范文的优秀表达，这样会更快提升，能在正式考试中根据不同的题目要求写出更切题的文章。继续加油(ง •_•)ง，相信你一定能成功，Go Go!

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