启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的考研英语作文模板高分范文。本文呈现的2010年考研英语一大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot, which includes a lot of different cultures, such as "Kongfu", "Chinese Traditional Culture" and "Structure". It looks like very delicious and healthy. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is culture corporate that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, different cultures can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, culture integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for shaping national morals, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

In brief, cultural integration is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all start to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：culture corporate

批改：cultural cooperation 这里要用形容词+名词

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot, which includes a lot of different cultures, such as "Kongfu", "Chinese Traditional Culture" and "Structure". It looks like very delicious and healthy. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is culture corporate that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：描述漫画内容，揭示漫画背后所反映的社会现象和深刻哲理，清晰直观。

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, different cultures can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, culture integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for shaping national morals, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

批改：以分论点的形式论述文化融合的重要性，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：In brief, cultural integration is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all start to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：19/20

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：第一段为传统的图画描述段，根据图画中的具体信息，尤其是下面的文字说明，进行直接描述。第二段以分论点的形式阐释图画寓意，文化的融合和交流问题，逻辑严谨，层次分明。最后一段表明作者本人对文化融合和交流这种现象的态度或看法，此评论部分可以提出建议，考虑背景及原因，或描述未来。

整体来看，作文理解了漫画内涵，段落框架明确，大体上与题目要求保持一致，但是在表达上还存在一定问题。从点评中可以看出作文中有一些表述不当之处，主要体现在词汇使用和搭配不当，加油！

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