考研英语二写作技巧每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2019年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the future about university graduder in 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the percentage of further education was 26.3%, but by 2018, this rate substantially risen to 34%. In constant, the portation of working expercised a high decrease of 7.4%. Meanwhile, the percentage of strating a company relatively stable and steady.

The core reasons for this phenomenon can be

summarized as follows, as the conductor of

masterminding the symphony of this changes, our government had made great efforts to build a education system, enabling university students to have more opportunities to further education. In addition,as the saying goes, "On life"s stadge, pressure is always present". Nowadays, univerity students are compelled to confront more academil pressure, as a result,an increasing number of university students believe that further education is vey inportant if they want to success in a long run. Considering these factrs, the observed phenomenon is unsurprising.

What about future trends, I am confident that the rate of further education will contine to increase, in contrast,the percentage of finding a job will decrease in the following decate.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：future

批改：future whereabouts未来去向

原文：graduder

批改：graduates

批改：加had

原文：constant

批改：contrast

原文：portation

批改：proportion

原文：expercised

批改：experienced

原文：strating a company

批改：starting up business remained

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the future about university graduder in 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the percentage of further education was 26.3%, but by 2018, this rate substantially risen to 34%. In constant, the portation of working expercised a high decrease of 7.4%. Meanwhile, the percentage of strating a company relatively stable and steady.

批改：在描述图表信息时要注意语言的准确性。

原文：academil

批改：academic

原文： as

批改：前加and连接两个并列分句

原文：inportant

批改：important

原文：success

批改：to不定式后加动词原形，改成succeed

原文：factrs

批改：factors

原文：he core reasons for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows, as the conductor of masterminding the symphony of this changes, our government had made great efforts to build a education system, enabling university students to have more opportunities to further education. In addition,as the saying goes, "On life"s stadge, pressure is always present". Nowadays, univerity students are compelled to confront more academil pressure, as a result,an increasing number of university students believe that further education is vey inportant if they want to success in a long run. Considering these factrs, the observed phenomenon is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：,

批改：问号

原文：contine

批改：continue

原文：decate

批改：decades

原文：What about future trends, I am confident that the rate of further education will contine to increase, in contrast,the percentage of finding a job will decrease in the following decate.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，要注意区分词性；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意两个分句之间用连接词连接；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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