本文整理了2017年考研英语一大作文真题原文及高分批改例文，是备考考研英语作文真题范文的实用素材。考研英语作文在考研英语中占据重要分值，历年真题范文能够帮助考生快速把握命题规律与评分要点，下面让我们一同走进这篇批改范文。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there is a young man, lying on a chair, looking at his bookshelf and saying he has lots of books. On the contrary, the right-hand cartoon portrayal, a boy is reading one book and plans to finish 20 books this year. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that being practical is the brush that paints a bright future, while daydreaming is a shackle that hinders our progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, while certain Chinese traditions may be outdate, the quality of taking action is one that should never lose its luster, as it is a crucial price in shaping admirable character of the Chinese people. what is more, empty thinking is not only merely the chronic poison that stifles potential, but also the Achilles" heel of many younth. It is silently erodes opportunities while warping the ladder of ascent into a self-destructive slide.

In brief, being practical is a catalyst of societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality；additionally，we must be acutely aware of the dietrimental effects of daydreaming，to ensure our growth stays on course.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：In the left-hand cartoon, there is a young man, lying on a chair, looking at his bookshelf and saying he has lots of books. On the contrary, the right-hand cartoon portrayal, a boy is reading one book and plans to finish 20 books this year. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that being practical is the brush that paints a bright future, while daydreaming is a shackle that hinders our progress.

批改：准确描述了漫画内容及其寓意

原文：outdate

批改：形容词outdated

原文：price

批改：piece

原文：admirable

批改：加the

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

原文：younth

批改：youth

原文：is

批改：删除is

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, while certain Chinese traditions may be outdate, the quality of taking action is one that should never lose its luster, as it is a crucial price in shaping admirable character of the Chinese people. what is more, empty thinking is not only merely the chronic poison that stifles potential, but also the Achilles" heel of many younth. It is silently erodes opportunities while warping the ladder of ascent into a self-destructive slide.

批改：论点清晰，词汇和句法丰富

原文：dietrimental

批改：detrimental

原文：In brief, being practical is a catalyst of societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality；additionally，we must be acutely aware of the dietrimental effects of daydreaming，to ensure our growth stays on course.

批改：提出倡议，呼应主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15/20分。

1. 题目要求：作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，模板运用的比较灵活，继续保持；

2. 语言表达：运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，状语从句，定语从句，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3. 行文逻辑：采用恰当的衔接手法，行文流畅，内容连贯；

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