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一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot, cooking various cultures such as kong fu, Buddhism and Shakespeare and so on, which seems to be so delicious and nutritious. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is cultural integration that plays a significant and positive role in our personal lives and society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, cultural integration can ignite our creativity and nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful. What’s more, cultural integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall national strength, and shaping national morals, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

In brief, cultural integration is the catalyst for social personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we develop individual and make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：kong

批改：kung

原文：seems

批改：seem

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot, cooking various cultures such as kong fu, Buddhism and Shakespeare and so on, which seems to be so delicious and nutritious. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is cultural integration that plays a significant and positive role in our personal lives and society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, cultural integration can ignite our creativity and nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful. What’s more, cultural integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall national strength, and shaping national morals, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

批改：加and

原文：In brief, cultural integration is the catalyst for social personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we develop individual and make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意“功夫”的正确写法；句式方面，注意句子结构的完整，不要缺少连词；语法方面，注意从句里的谓语要注意主谓一致。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节性错误会更好。继续加油。

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