进入冲刺阶段，每一份考研英语写作锦囊写作资料都弥足珍贵。本文整理的2019年考研英语二批改范例，由启航教育写作主讲亲自精批，已标注高分句型与失分雷区。无论你是考研英语二一还是考研英语二二考生，都能从中找到提分灵感。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

As chown in the picture , two mon are climbing on the stage , Upon seeing this , two men veace very differenely . One man , stting the stage , and disprisedly says ." Im tived ,1 don " e want to climb ." While the other man , with his hand delivering a botele of water , to him 、 opitimiticly says ," Don " t give up ! We can velas and keepon climbing "

eirseglonce , the imaye cleurly reveale that people " s attiende towards the same setbart can differ dramuticolly , with some besoming negative while the others remaining optimistic and persevering . Acta -- ally , the piceure is insended so vemind us of the vital vole that insistence plays in helping us overcome difficulties and achieve cuccess 。 with At our insistence , we can overcame even the thanghest obstacles ; Without it even minor challeuges may seem in surmountable .

Nemerous esamples thoughout histony con illustrat the transformative pouer of insiseonce . For instonce , duspie Thomas Edison , despite failing thaunds thouords of times , at his insissence and eventully inuented the light bulb . In arclusion ,& insistente is the cornerstone of overeaming hallanges und reaching sacces

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：ho

批改：shown

原文：on

批改：men

原文：on the stage

批改：the mountain

原文：,

批改：句号

原文：eac

批改：have different opinions

原文：tti

批改：sitting on

批改：逗号

原文：Im tived ,1 don " e

批改：I"m tired, and I don"t

原文：tele

批改：bottle

原文： ,

批改：删掉

原文：、 op

批改：him后面逗号，and he optimistically

原文：elas

批改：do it

原文：eepo

批改：keep

原文： differenely . One man , stting the stage , and disprisedly says ." Im tived ,1 don " e want to climb ." While the other man , with his hand delivering a botele of water , to him 、 opitimiticly says ," Don " t give up ! We can velas and keepon climbing "

批改：其实句子结构还是可以的，但是标点，单词错的太多了呀，考生如果是拍照上传一定要仔细检查后再上传哦。

原文：eirseglonce , the imaye cleurly reveale

批改：这是乱码了吗，The images clearly reveal

原文：tiend

批改：attitudes

原文：etba

批改：drawback

原文：ramutico

批改：dramatically

原文：ith some besoming

批改：and one man becomes

原文：ta --

批改：Actally,

原文：eure is insended so vemind us of

批改：picture intends to convey to us that the role of perseverance

原文：。 w

批改：句号是一个点，With大写

原文：th At our insiste

批改：With our perseverance

原文：rc

批改：overcome

原文：anghest obsta

批改：largest obstacles

原文：en minor challeuges may seem in surmountable .

批改：考生想表达什么呢 ，有点不知所云哦，乱码了

原文：with some besoming negative while the others remaining optimistic and persevering . Acta -- ally , the piceure is insended so vemind us of the vital vole that insistence plays in helping us overcome difficulties and achieve cuccess 。 with At our insistence , we can overcame even the thanghest obstacles ; Without it even minor challeuges may seem in surmount

批改：写的非常不好，考生应该是上传的过程中出现了问题，自己也没有认真检查，出现了乱码情况

原文：ples thoughout histony con illustrat the transformative pouer of insiseonce . For instonce , duspie Thomas Edison , despite failing thaunds thouords of times , at his insissence and eventully inuented the light bulb . In arclusion ,& insistente is the cornerstone of overeaming hallanges und reaching sac

批改：这段也是，考生可以重新上传一份。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：文题不符哦，我就按照考研英语一大作文给你改了。

分数就不给你打了，应该是上传过程中出现了问题，如果考生本来就是这个水平，分数可能只能得个位数。

专业批改是考研英语写作提分直接有效的方式之一。启航教育提供由资深讲师亲批的免费批改服务，针对考研英语二大作文逐句逐段给出修改建议。完成本文精读之后，欢迎将你的作文提交给启航教育，享受考研英语写作锦囊高分批改。