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一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart breaks down the cost of citizens in one city during the spring festival. New year"s gifts is the overwhelming majority at 40%.Traffic,parties and others are also significant purpose,they all accounting for 20%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be surmmarized as follows. To star with, it is important for us to be politeness in such an important festival for our country so that we should visit ourolders and friends carrying gifts. In addtion, we need to go to many places and have more parties than usual.Because, almost everyone in their holidaies and wants to meet more friends.

Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

What about future trends? I am confident the cost of gifts will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, traffic

and parties" cost will likely continue to remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： surmmarized

批改：summarized

原文：spring festival

批改：Spring Festival 节日专有名词首字母大写

原文：ourolders

批改：our elders

原文：holidaies

批改：holidays

原文：New year"s gifts is

批改：New Year gifts are 主谓不一致

原文：they all accounting for 20%

批改：表达有误，可换为 each accounting for/which each account for

原文：purpose

批改：purpose 目的 可换为 categories

原文：breaks down the cost of citizens

批改：表达有误，可换为 shows the Spring Festival consumption structure of citizens in a city

原文：star

批改：start

原文：addtion

批改：addition

原文：politeness

批改：此处应用形容词 polite

原文：almost everyone in their holidaies

批改：缺少谓语动词 ，可换为 Because almost everyone has holidays

原文：traffic and parties" cost

批改：此处避免歧义，可换为 the cost of traffic and parties

批改：内容上对春节消费趋势给出预判，符合要求；语言表达存在句子不完整、时间表述不当等问题，结论稍显笼统。

批改：内容上尝试分析春节消费结构的原因，贴合写作要求；语言逻辑分层论述，但原因分析流于表面、缺乏深度，且拼写、语法错误密集，论据说服力不足

批改：内容上呈现了春节消费的核心数据，契合要求；语言逻辑存在拼写、语法和表达错误，且表述不够规范，影响信息传递的精准度。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：6

评语：结构框架完整；内容上贴合春节消费场景，核心数据呈现准确。但语言错误贯穿全文，拼写、语法、词汇搭配错误较多，部分表达语义不通；内容原因分析论据说服力不足；图表描述不够规范。继续加油！

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