考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2014年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二大作文话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of urban population and rural population during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, enabling rural residents to have ample opportunities to find jobs in big cities. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, rural residents are compelled to confront immense life pressure, and as a result, working in big city has emerged as their significant choice. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：change

批改：需用复数 “changes”（对应城乡两类人口变化）

原文： has made

批改：时态错误（描述 1990-2010 年的举措，用 “made”）

原文：big city

批改：需用复数 “big cities”

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the change of urban population and rural population during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：描述图片内容，符合题目要求

原文：The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, enabling rural residents to have ample opportunities to find jobs in big cities. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, rural residents are compelled to confront immense life pressure, and as a result, working in big city has emerged as their significant choice. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：提出了自己的观点，使用了表示逻辑关系的连接词，还引用了一些名言俗语，条理较为清晰

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：预测未来趋势，符合结尾段内容和结构

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12

这篇图表分析文框架完整，能准确捕捉 “1990-2010 年城镇人口激增、农村人口下降” 的核心趋势，但存在个别小问题，时态、单复数等语法细节有瑕疵。写完可以整体检查一下，希望继续努力，加油！

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