正在备考考研英语的你，是否还在为2014年考研英语二大作文的写法犯愁？本文精选一篇高分组同学的批改例文，系统梳理考研英语作文话题的常考话题与写作框架。透过启航教育老师的逐段点评，你能直观感受高分作文的得分诀窍。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart clearly depicts the changes of urban population and rural population in China during 20 years. In 1990, the

number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure substaintially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced, a significant decline of 160 million during the same period .

The care reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, enabling rural residents to have ample opportunities to find jobs in big cities. In additon,An increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, go to work in city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：line

批改：bar chart柱状图

批改：加had

原文：The line chart clearly depicts the changes of urban population and rural population in China during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure substaintially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced, a significant decline of 160 million during the same period .

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：care

批改：core

原文：An

批改：逗号后单词小写

原文：go

批改：动名词做主语改成going

原文：The care reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, enabling rural residents to have ample opportunities to find jobs in big cities. In additon,An increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, go to work in city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，注意逗号后单词小写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整；语法方面，注意动词不能做主语，动名词才能做主语。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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