启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的启航考研英语高分范文。本文呈现的2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart dlearly depicts the change in china"s Urban and Rural population over Two De-cades. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 210, this figure risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a slow increase. of 160 million.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the corductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to develop urban areas. and drive economic growth In addition, An increasing number of young people in rural believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, developing in rural areas is indispensable. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that. the numbe of urban population will steadily inerease in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will hiklery continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：dlearly

批改：clearly

原文：change

批改：复数

原文：china"s

批改：China"s

原文：Urban and Rural

批改：urban和rural不需要大写

原文：Two De-cades

批改：不需要大写

原文：210

批改：2010

批改：加had

原文：The bar chart dlearly depicts the change in china"s Urban and Rural population over Two De-cades. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 210, this figure risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a slow increase. of 160 million.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

批改：去掉

批改：加句号

原文：An

批改：an小写

批改：加areas

原文：rural

批改：urban

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the corductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to develop urban areas. and drive economic growth In addition, An increasing number of young people in rural believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, developing in rural areas is indispensable. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

原文：hiklery

批改：likely

原文：what about future trends? I am confident that. the numbe of urban population will steadily inerease in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will hiklery continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，名词单复数要使用正确，国家名作为专有名词首字母大写，其他普通词汇首字母小写即可；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整，不要缺少成分；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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