思想品质、教育文化是考研英语大作文的高频命题方向，本文呈现的2019年考研英语二批改范例正是聚焦这一主旨。启航教育老师透过文章结构、衔接表达和结尾升华三方面，逐段展示了一篇考研英语写作冲刺高分范文的诞生过程。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

From the information given in the above column chart,we can see a striking change in graduates" career choices in a certain university between 2013 and 2018.During this period,the proportion of those who sought for jobs decreased sharply,from 68.1% to 60.7% .By contrast,there was an obvious growth in the share of those who continued their academic pursuits ,from 26.3% to 34%.Meanwhile,the ratio of those who created their own business showed a slight rise,from 1.3% to 2.6%.

At least two fundamental factors could have contributed to this phenomenon. For onething ,the Chinese job market in recent years is characterized by fierce competition,thereby enabling plenty of graduates to decide not to enter the workplace.For another,compared with the past years ,the government formulated a series of policies to alleviate employment pressure ,including encouraging the establishment of companies and the expansion of postgraduate enrollment.

In conclusion,the fierce competition and government policy-making are two major causes of the above phenomenon.Based on the analysis of the current employment situation,It is expected that this trend will continue for a period of time in the future.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：From the information given in the above column chart,we can see a striking change in graduates" career choices in a certain university between 2013 and 2018.During this period,the proportion of those who sought for jobs decreased sharply,from 68.1% to 60.7% .By contrast,there was an obvious growth in the share of those who continued their academic pursuits ,from 26.3% to 34%.Meanwhile,the ratio of those who created their own business showed a slight rise,from 1.3% to 2.6%.

批改：将图表中的内容描述的完整准确，值得表扬。

原文：At least two fundamental factors could have contributed to this phenomenon. For onething ,the Chinese job market in recent years is characterized by fierce competition,thereby enabling plenty of graduates to decide not to enter the workplace.For another,compared with the past years ,the government formulated a series of policies to alleviate employment pressure ,including encouraging the establishment of companies and the expansion of postgraduate enrollment.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：It

批改：it，逗号后单词小写

原文：In conclusion,the fierce competition and government policy-making are two major causes of the above phenomenon.Based on the analysis of the current employment situation,It is expected that this trend will continue for a period of time in the future.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础较好。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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