启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2025年考研英语一大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语一作文范文备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

This table offers us a informative glimpse into the ownership of major durable appliances per 100 families in China from 2014 to 2023. To be specific, the upward trend was invisible in the average of air conditioners, which stood at 75.2 in 2014 and jumped into 145.9 in 2023. As for the ownership of washing machine and refrigerators, with the number rising from 83.7 to 98.2 and from 85.5 to 183.4 respectively during the same ten-year period.

The statistics endeavors to underscore the pervasive issue that the standard of living has made stable strides over the past decade. There exist a multitude of reasons to interpret this uptrend. First and foremost, the capacity of consuming of mortal residents has achieved a tremendous leap forward. This substantial advancement is largely attribute to the national policy which lie a solid foundation of our economic development. Not least because economics is the cornerstone of evolution of society and caters precisely to people‘s pursuit of a high-quality life. What"s more, the significant progress of technology is indispensable to ignite consumers’ zeal to purchase.

In synthesis, the table demonstrates immense technology-driven potential for economnic development. The paramount importance should be attached to stimulating markets’ demands by authorities concerned.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：This table offers us a informative glimpse into the ownership of major durable appliances per 100 families in China from 2014 to 2023.

批改：表达正式，句子高级

原文：a

批改：an

原文：invisible

批改：invisible意思是看不见，无形的。这里用observed显著的明显的比较好

原文：into

批改：jump 后接 to，不接 into哦

原文：machine

批改：machines

原文：This table offers us a informative glimpse into the ownership of major durable appliances per 100 families in China from 2014 to 2023. To be specific, the upward trend was invisible in the average of air conditioners, which stood at 75.2 in 2014 and jumped into 145.9 in 2023. As for the ownership of washing machine and refrigerators, with the number rising from 83.7 to 98.2 and from 85.5 to 183.4 respectively during the same ten-year period.

批改：内容完成度高，但是 有多处搭配错误，要多多注意

原文：a multitude of

批改：是标准高分套语！

原文：a tremendous leap forward

批改：形象、自然、有力度，表达质量很好

原文：endeavors

批改：该词意思是努力，不适合用在该处 应改为indicate / suggest

原文：consuming

批改：词性错误：consumption 是名词； consuming 是形容词

原文：mortal

批改：mortal 表示凡人，用词不当。改为ordinary更好哦

原文：attribute

批改：be attributed to（固定搭配）

原文：lie

批改：单数主语，动词应为 lays

原文： Not least because

批改：句子结构不完整。缺少主语，改为This is also because…要注意在句子结构正确的基础上再用高级句型哦

原文：The statistics endeavors to underscore the pervasive issue that the standard of living has made stable strides over the past decade. There exist a multitude of reasons to interpret this uptrend. First and foremost, the capacity of consuming of mortal residents has achieved a tremendous leap forward. This substantial advancement is largely attribute to the national policy which lie a solid foundation of our economic development. Not least because economics is the cornerstone of evolution of society and caters precisely to people‘s pursuit of a high-quality life. What"s more, the significant progress of technology is indispensable to ignite consumers’ zeal to purchase.

批改：思想深度较好，但语言准确性不足，有若干不当用词和语法错误

原文：markets’ demands

批改：demand 多为不可数 markets’ demands → market demand

原文：In synthesis, the table demonstrates immense technology-driven potential for economnic development. The paramount importance should be attached to stimulating markets’ demands by authorities concerned.

批改：结构完整

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/20

这篇作文结构规范，层次清楚，观点明确，词汇丰富，属于有潜力的中上水平作文。

不过，语言使用不够准确：

1.若干词汇使用不当，如mortal residents、pervasive issue;

2.语法问题时常出现，如attribute→attributed;

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