对于考研英语一而言，2010年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the picture, there is a boiling hot pot containing diverse cultural elements, such as Kung Fu, Peking Opera, Shakespeare’s works and a series of traditional thoughts. Both Chinese culture and Western civilization coexist in this hot pot. Obviously, the above picture shows that diverse cultures play an increasingly significant role both in our daily lives and society.

This picture conveys the trend of the integration of global cultures. First and foremost, as Chinese culture spreads globally, it allows an increasing number of people from other nations to learn about China, while many Western art forms also become popular in China. What’s more, this phenomenon not only enriches people’s daily lives but also promotes the exchange and development of cultures. Last but not least, we must treat diverse cultures with a rational attitude: we should learn advanced parts of Western civilization and carry forward our traditional culture. Only in the way can we build a colorful culture world.

In brief, culture integration can boost the development of society and individuals. Therefore, we should actively support the cultural exchanges and carry forward our traditional cultures. Additionally, we must be aware of the detrimental effects of cultural dross.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：Kung Fu

批改：其实功夫的英文无需大写，也无需留空格，kungfu 即可

原文：society

批改：in society

原文：s shown in the picture, there is a boiling hot pot containing diverse cultural elements, such as Kung Fu, Peking Opera, Shakespeare’s works and a series of traditional thoughts. Both Chinese culture and Western civilization coexist in this hot pot. Obviously, the above picture shows that diverse cultures play an increasingly significant role both in our daily lives and societ

批改：第一段描述漫画比较全面，找的主题也比较明确具体，句子写的比较地道，整体读起来很通顺。

原文：ulture

批改：cultural

原文：cture conveys the trend of the integration of global cultures. First and foremost, as Chinese culture spreads globally, it allows an increasing number of people from other nations to learn about China, while many Western art forms also become popular in China. What’s more, this phenomenon not only enriches people’s daily lives but also promotes the exchange and development of cultures. Last but not least, we must treat diverse cultures with a rational attitude: we should learn advanced parts of Western civilization and carry forward our traditional culture. Only in the way can we build a colorful culture world.

批改：第二段理由和原因分析丰富详实，贴合主题，语句没有大的语法错误和词汇错误，分点写很有逻辑性。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15/20

语法：语法上注意adj修饰名词，词性要学会使用哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，读起来比较顺畅。

词汇：单词没有什么问题，继续保持哦。

内容：三段结构可以的，字数和内容分配的很均衡，第二段分点写很有逻辑性。内容整体还是可以的，第二段范文句子和自己写的句子杂糅，使之成为自己的文章，这个悟性还是可以的。

未来可期，继续加油吧。

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