备战2017年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语一写作高分规划。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand picture,there is a boy,lying in the chair and saying ,"I have too much books ". On the contrary, in the right-hand, another boy is saying that he will read twenty books in this year. Evidently, the picture intends to convey to readers that practice is the brush that paints a bright future, while lack of pratice is the shackle that hinders progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand,practice can ignite our creativity,and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment,thus making life rewarding and meaningful,rather than being self- consuming.On the other hand,lack of practice can harm relationships,erode trust and respect,and cause the loss of opportunities and resources.It can also damage personal image and reputation,leading to exclusion and failure in work and social situations.

In brief, practice is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit.Therefore,we should actively support and advocate this quality ; additionally,we must be acutely aware of the detrimental effects of lack of practice to ensure our growth stays on course.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： much

批改：books 是可数名词复数，此处要用 many 修饰

原文： right-hand

批改：此处为名词短语，改为 right-hand picture

原文：in

批改：当使用 this, that, next, last, every 等词与时间单位（如 time, week, year, Monday）连用时，前面不需要任何介词。

原文：pratice

批改：practice

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，表达也很好

批改：内容和句式表达都很好

批改：语法正确，结尾段内容总结也很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2.拼写要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的表达，总的来说写的很好，加油！

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