一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2025年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二写作冲刺教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the survey of the main daily activity of seniors of comments. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by walking at 68.3%. Additionally, factors such as taking care of flowers reading and playing wei qi are considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8%, 18.4%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, An increasing number of senior people believe that in morden society full of changes andchances. Watching TV is indispensable if they wish to achieve happy in the long run. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is an significant progress made by China"s TV industry is responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising. What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remainrelatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：activity

批改：复数

原文：of comments

批改：in a certain community

原文：flowers

批改：后加逗号

原文：wei qi

批改：chess

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the survey of the main daily activity of seniors of comments. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by walking at 68.3%. Additionally, factors such as taking care of flowers reading and playing wei qi are considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8%, 18.4%, respectively.

批改：在描述图表信息时要注意语言的准确性。

批改：逗号，和后面那句话是一句

原文：happy

批改：改成名词happiness

原文：an

批改：the特指

原文：is

批改：in

原文：he core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, An increasing number of senior people believe that in morden society full of changes andchances. Watching TV is indispensable if they wish to achieve happy in the long run. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is an significant progress made by China"s TV industry is responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising. What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remainrelatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

论述的内容全面，逻辑结构清晰，字数符合作文的要求，值得表扬，希望能够注意以下的小问题。

词汇方面：注意正确区分词性，注意名词单复数的正确使用以及正确使用冠词。

语法方面：注语法基础还不错。

其它细节：注意标点符号的正确使用。

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