对于考研英语一而言，2023年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

Were it not for the chart above, these thought-provoking statistics would be neglected:Specifically, from 2012 to 2021, the persentage of health literacy saw a remarkable increase, rising from about 8.80% to 25.40%.

The fundamental factors that contribute to the aforementioned tendency may be expounded as follows. Firstly, in the sweeping trend , the rise in health preservation symbolizes the promotion of public attention to health. Besides, all kinds of media channels, be they newspapers or the Internet, vigorously advocate that what really matter is not merely temporary physical and mental pleasure, but the adherence to the essence of health, encouraging dwellers to persue real health. People"s pursuit of health is no longer limited to a result-orlented approach, but also enjoys the process of promoting health.

This trend, against the backdrop of the economic and scientific boom in China, is likely to sustain growth in the foreseeable future.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：persentage

批改：percentage

原文：Were it not for the chart above, these thought-provoking statistics would be neglected:Specifically, from 2012 to 2021, the persentage of health literacy saw a remarkable increase, rising from about 8.80% to 25.40%.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：matter

批改：matters

原文：persue

批改：pursue

原文：orlented

批改：oriented

原文：The fundamental factors that contribute to the aforementioned tendency may be expounded as follows. Firstly, in the sweeping trend , the rise in health preservation symbolizes the promotion of public attention to health. Besides, all kinds of media channels, be they newspapers or the Internet, vigorously advocate that what really matter is not merely temporary physical and mental pleasure, but the adherence to the essence of health, encouraging dwellers to persue real health. People"s pursuit of health is no longer limited to a result-orlented approach, but also enjoys the process of promoting health.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：This trend, against the backdrop of the economic and scientific boom in China, is likely to sustain growth in the foreseeable future.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意主谓一致。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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