进入冲刺阶段，每一份考研英语写作技巧写作资料都弥足珍贵。本文整理的2016年考研英语二批改范例，由启航教育写作主讲亲自精批，已标注高分句型与失分雷区。无论你是考研英语二一还是考研英语二二考生，都能从中找到提分灵感。

一、考研英语二2016年大作文题目

考研英语二2016年大作文Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、考研英语二2016年大作文批改例文

The pie chart shows us the different reasons why students from a university travel.We can see that most students travel to see the beauty。of nature (37%) and to reduce stress (33%). These are the two main reasons. Other reasons are less common: making friends (9%), learning to be independent (6%), and other purposes (15%).

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can he summarized as follows.First, students have a lot of stress from their studies. Traveling to nice places is a great way for them to relax and feel happy. Second, although not many people travel mainly to make friends, they often make new friends during trips. This makes traveling more enjoyable.

What about future trends? I am confident that the chosen of students will likely remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：。

批改：删除

原文： he

批改：检查是否转写时的错误，改为be

原文：chosen

批改：这里应该是名词，改为 choices

原文：see

批改：see强调的是看的动作，改为 enjoy 有享受的意思

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10 /15

从结构层面看，本文最大的问题是字数太少，不满足题目要求；

从内容层面看，第二段的分析内容可以适当扩充；

从语言层面看，单词拼写和语法上有一点错误，影响评分；

建议：语法上区分单词词性、积累地道表达，建议先熟练运用模板句，要让自己有话可写，加油。

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