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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of the settled population in China"s rural and urban respectively among twenty years. In 1990 the number of urban population. was 300 million, but by 2010 this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. Meanwhile, the number of rural population experienced a slow dedline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of high-speed advancement society, people have no longer content with rural life, they also persue spiritual and creature enjoyment in urban. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, chances, and chanllenges, living in urban is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident the number of the settled population in urban. will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of the settled population in rural will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：0

批改：后加逗号

批改：删掉句号

原文：dli

批改：decline

原文：s the change of the settled population in China"s rural and urban respectively among twenty years. In 1990 the number of urban population. was 300 million, but by 2010 this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. Meanwhile, the number of rural population experienced a slow dedline of 160 million during the same pe

批改：第一段表述数据还是比较清晰明确的，句子结构也比较完整，一些小错误注意避免哦，

原文：hey

批改：句子与句子之间是需要用标点和大小写来明确分开的，要不就用连词，写成复合句，但是不建议大家写长句，简单句多写一些，所以这里前面改为句号，这里大写，They

原文：ersue

批改：pursue

原文：eatur

批改：这里单词是不是写错了，精神和物质享受，物质是material

原文：ba

批改：urban是adj，这里后面要加areas

原文：ban

批改：后加areas

原文：t society, people have no longer content with rural life, they also persue spiritual and creature enjoyment in urban. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, chances, and chanllenges, living in urban is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：内容还是比较充分和丰富的，句子结构完整，比较符合题意，原因分析和现象解释比较到位，注意小错误哦。

原文：w

批改：大写

原文：t

批改：后加that

原文：rban.

批改：urban areas

原文：al

批改：rural是adj，后加areas

原文：stable

批改：decrease和stable留一个即可

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

语法：语法上注意标点，大小写，that引导的从句，最好不要省略that，句子与句子之间要用标点和大小写隔开，简单句和复合句需要掌握写法，语法错误比较多 ，注意修改。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，第二段很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，但是写错了单词哦，注意一些词汇使用的适当性哦。

内容：内容比较符合英文作文写作要求，结构合理。

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