对于考研英语一而言，2025年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of enjoyable activities which the elder do majorly in their daily life at a certain community. Watching TV takes the leads at 90.8%, followed by walking is 68.3%. And these factors such as planting flowers, reading are also considered, accounting for 34.7% and 31.8% respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon are summarised as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, the government establish a sound healthy system, with tremendous efforts, which enables the elder living in the community paying more attention on health and enjoying their spare time. What"s more, as a saying goes, "On the life"s stage, the elder often feel bored.”Nowadays, the elder are compelled to confront several boring things, and as a reasult, watching TV has emerged as their significanest choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors, the dipicted phenomenon is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the above statistic figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the elder, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of enjoyable activities which the elder do majorly in their daily life at a certain community. Watching TV takes the leads at 90.8%, followed by walking is 68.3%. And these factors such as planting flowers, reading are also considered, accounting for 34.7% and 31.8% respectively.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象。

原文：establish

批改：has established

原文：on

批改：to

原文：reasult

批改：result

原文：significanest

批改：most significant

原文：dipicted

批改：depicted

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon are summarised as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, the government establish a sound healthy system, with tremendous efforts, which enables the elder living in the community paying more attention on health and enjoying their spare time. What"s more, as a saying goes, "On the life"s stage, the elder often feel bored.”Nowadays, the elder are compelled to confront several boring things, and as a reasult, watching TV has emerged as their significanest choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors, the dipicted phenomenon is unsurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：what about future trends? I am confident that the above statistic figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the elder, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

语法：语言表达和语法基础上，进步的空间还很大。比如本次作文中出现多次的单词拼写错误等问题，会很拉低你的平均分。另外还需要注意一些基础的语法问题和表达搭配问题，有时间好好看看文中的批改，细心吸收，争取在接下来的练习中避免类似的错误。

首段简要概述图表核心内容，突出“被动居家活动占主导”的特点，避免单纯罗列数据。第二段分析数据差异的原因，从看电视的便利性、散步的健康需求以及益智活动参与度低的可能原因（社区支持不足）等方面展开。第三段可结合当前趋势，合理推测未来的发展方向，同时提出个人观点和建议，强调社区应提供更多活动场所和组织，以促进老年人精神生活和整体健康。

文章整体来说，言简意赅，符合了考试写作提纲的要求，但是在表达上还存在一定问题。后续继续注重练习，加油！

考研英语作文万能句型写作提分高效的方式，是让经验丰富的老师亲自批改你的作文。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，主讲斌哥亲批每一份学员作业，真题作业批改、轻松应对各种复杂题目，让考研英语写作更有底。