作为考研英语备考的核心模块，2015年考研英语二大作文承载了大量学生的提分期待。本文带来的这篇批改例文，紧扣考研英语二作文范文常见话题，由启航教育资深英语教研团队逐句批改，详细标注语法、词汇与逻辑三大失分点，是考研英语写作提分的优质资料。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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48. The pie chart clearly displays the percontage of breakcown of the costs of certain city in our country during the Spring Festival vacation. New Year gifts takes the lead at 402, followed by transportation, gathering and dining, and others expenses at 20%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendaus efforts to build a sound transpartation system, enabling people to have convenient vehicle for travel. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with more material satisfaction they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose New Year gifts to express their emoton. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomanon in the chart is unserprising

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and trathly reflect the choice of people in the Spring Festival vacation, serving a a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：rcon

批改：percentage

原文：of

批改：删掉

原文：reakco

批改：breakdown

原文：f

批改：of residents in a certain city

原文：kes

批改：take

原文：402

批改：40%

原文：ntry during the Spring Festival vacation. New Year gifts takes the lead at 402, followed by transportation, gathering and dining, and others expenses at 20%, respectively.

批改：第一段描述图表还是比较到位的，数据清楚，明确，句子结构合理，但是小错误比较多，注意修改

原文：menda

批改：tremendous

原文：spart

批改：transportation

原文：th

批改：前面加逗号，and they

原文：oton.

批改：emotions

原文：nomano

批改：phenomenon

原文：erpris

批改：unsurprising.注意加句号

原文：strating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendaus efforts to build a sound transpartation system, enabling people to have convenient vehicle for travel. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with more material satisfaction they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose New Year gifts to express their emoton. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomanon in the chart is unse

批改：原因分析和现象解释比较到位，句子结构完整，注意一些小错误哦

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

语法：语法注意表述要完整哦，不能丢成分，词性注意用法哦，简单句写成复合句的话，注意加连词。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，也有写错的哦，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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