考研英语写作模板命题趋势越来越关注社会热点与考生思辨能力。本文带来的2011年考研英语二批改范例，透过图表/图画深挖现象背后的本质，由启航教育老师逐段精批，可帮助考生建立稳定的考研英语写作思维框架。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

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The bar chart clearly depict the changes in market shares in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is made undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the significant progress was made by China"s automotive industry in responding to these changes. In addtion, against the backdrop of our county"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number/ proportion of china"s cars will stedily increase in the following decade. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American cars will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：depict

批改：此处要用谓语动词的三单形式，改为 depicts

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

原文：stable

批改：删去

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

原文：made

批改：删去

批改：语法正确

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：number/

批改：删去

原文：china"s

批改：首字母大写，且改为 Chinese 更合适

原文：stedily

批改：steadily

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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