启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的启航考研英语高分范文。本文呈现的2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The table chart clearly depicts the change of resident health literacy.In 2012, the percentage of healthy literacy was 8.8%, but by 2021, the rate had substantially risen to 25.4%. During the time, the rate had continued rising.

Several factors contribute to this trend. To start with, a growing number of individuals are piroitizing personal health, individuals are increasing seeking not only material satisfaction but also health. In addition, with the rapid advancement of the economy,medical standards had risen and the proliferation of health knowledge has made health lieracy proportion get raisen. Last but not least, The policy guidance and financial support urges those who pay attention to healthy litercy.

Overall, the data presented in the chart provides valuable insight into healthy litercy. It is anticipated that these patterns will remain relatively stable in the coming decades as cultural values and economic conditionas continue to influence people.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： During the time

批改：During this period

原文： piroitizing

批改：prioritizing

原文：increasing

批改：increasingly

原文：had

批改：have

原文：litercy.

批改：literacy

原文：conditionas

批改： conditions

原文：the rate

批改：用it替代重复表述

原文： healt

批改：health awareness

原文：table chart

批改：line chart

原文：The table chart clearly depicts the change of resident health literacy.In 2012, the percentage of healthy literacy was 8.8%, but by 2021, the rate had substantially risen to 25.4%. During the time, the rate had continued rising.

批改：描述图表中健康素养的变化趋势

原文：Several factors contribute to this trend. To start with, a growing number of individuals are piroitizing personal health, individuals are increasing seeking not only material satisfaction but also health. In addition, with the rapid advancement of the economy,medical standards had risen and the proliferation of health knowledge has made health lieracy proportion get raisen. Last but not least, The policy guidance and financial support urges those who pay attention to healthy litercy.

批改：围绕 “健康素养提升的原因” 展开分析

原文：Overall, the data presented in the chart provides valuable insight into healthy litercy. It is anticipated that these patterns will remain relatively stable in the coming decades as cultural values and economic conditionas continue to influence people.

批改：简短预测未来趋势

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1.题目要求：字数符合题目要求。文章需要分析图表并写出自己的观点，符合题目要求。

2.语言表达：语言表达清晰。但还有些拼写问题和语法错误，考生需要多加注意。

3.内容层面：基本包含题目要求的内容。但是文章的内容不够丰富，可以增添内容。

4.修改意见：这篇文章有效地分析了图表信息，并提供了原因和未来趋势的预测。尽管存在一些语法和拼写错误，但文章的整体结构和逻辑是清晰的。建议考生在写作时认真检查，注意语法和单词的准确性。另外范文只是参考，可以尝试用自己的语言写作，将对题目的理解用自己的话语表达出来。

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