对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2011年大作文题目

考研英语一2011年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2011年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists who throws rubbish casually while having fun. Evidently, the cartoon intends to convey to readers that civilized tour is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, although many things may be outbated in the rapid development of The Times, the virtue of civilization is one that should never be abandoned, as it is an essential bond that keeps the Chinese nation thriving. What is more, incivilization can harm relationships, erode trust and respect, and cause the loss of opportunities and resources. It Can also damage personal image and reputation. Leading to exclusion and failure in society.

How can we put an end to the problem of low quality tour? It is suggested by many that we need a package deal, including issuing related laws and strengthening moral education, etc. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：throws

批改：throw

原文： civilized tour

批改：being civilized while traveling

批改：逗号

原文：outbated

批改：outdated

原文： The Times,

批改：小写

原文：Can

批改：小写

原文：. Leading

批改：and lead to...

原文：How can we put an end to the problem of low quality tour? It is suggested by many that we need a package deal, including issuing related laws and strengthening moral education, etc. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

批改：good

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, although many things may be outbated in the rapid development of The Times, the virtue of civilization is one that should never be abandoned, as it is an essential bond that keeps the Chinese nation thriving. What is more, incivilization can harm relationships, erode trust and respect, and cause the loss of opportunities and resources. It Can also damage personal image and reputation. Leading to exclusion and failure in society.

批改：词汇和语法结构丰富

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists who throws rubbish casually while having fun. Evidently, the cartoon intends to convey to readers that civilized tour is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：描述准确

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15/20分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，主语从句，定语从句，非谓语结构和状语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

考研英语作文万能句型写作提分高效的方式，是让经验丰富的老师亲自批改你的作文。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，主讲斌哥亲批每一份学员作业，真题作业批改、轻松应对各种复杂题目，让考研英语写作更有底。