据启航教育英语教研组统计，考研英语写作模板话题连续多年成为考研英语一大作文的高频考点。本文带来的2010年考研英语一批改例文中，考生通过对社会热点的精准分析与地道表达，获得高分，其写作思路可供2027考研英语一考生直接借鉴。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon,there is a cultural hotpot,which mixed many factors such as Peking Opera,Kung Fu and Shakespeare.Evidently,the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is cultural communication that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.First and foremost,cultural communication can ignite our creativity,and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment,thus making life rewarding and meaningful,rather than being self-consuming.What is more,cultural communication holds exceptional significance for a nation,as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall national strength,further propelling social stability and sustainable development.In addition,cultural communication can promote mutual understanding and tolerance among different civilizations.

In brief,cultural communication is the catalyst for societal and personal development,from which we all stand to benefit.Therefore,we should actively support and advocate this practice .Only by doing so can we develop individual potential,build a more harmonious society and make our word shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：hotpot

批改：此处为两个词，改为 hot pot

原文：mixed

批改：此处用一般现在时，改为 mixes

原文： and Shakespeare

批改：此处不只是这三个并列成分，改为 ……，Shakespeare and so on

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，词汇和句式表达也很好

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

原文：word

批改：world

批改：结尾段表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合

语言表达：存在几处细节表达问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2.拼写要细心 。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，试着多用自己的话来写，总的来说写的很好，加油！

复习考研英语大作文，务必要重视范文精读+专业批改的双向结合。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，专为冲刺阶段考生打造，从话题预测到写作模板一应俱全，是考研英语写作模板写作提分的可靠方案。