对于考研英语一而言，2017年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there is a boy, lying on the chair, and saying that he has so many books. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, another boy making a plan that this year he would read 20 books. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that being practical is the brush that paints a bright future, while daydreaming is the shackle that hinders progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, being practical can ignite our creativity, and promote personal gronth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful rather than being self-consuming. On the other hand, daydreaming is like a heavy chain that hinders our progress, leaving us with a negative outlook on life and preventing us from shining brightly in future society.

In brife, being practical is the catalyst for personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should activity surpport and advocate this practice; additionally, we must be acuretly aware of detrimental effects of daydreaming to ensure our growth stays on course.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

原文：making

批改：缺少谓语动词，改为 is making

原文：this year he would read 20 books

批改：建议将 this year 放到这句话的最后

原文：would

批改：改为 will

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的

批改：语法正确

原文：meaningful

批改：加逗号

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：brife

批改：brief

原文：activity

批改：actively

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2.拼写要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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