正在备考考研英语的你，是否还在为2011年考研英语二大作文的写法犯愁？本文精选一篇高分组同学的批改例文，系统梳理考研英语作文话题的常考话题与写作框架。透过启航教育老师的逐段点评，你能直观感受高分作文的得分诀窍。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

This is a column chart, clearly illustrating the remarkable changes in the market shares of China among Chinese. Japanese and American car brands, from 2008 to 2009.There was a steep rise of about 7% in the market share of native brands, while that of Japanese brands declined noticeably by 10% from 35% to 25%. The figure for American brands remained almost constant, at 10% in both years.

The extraordinary market preference of Chinese car brands can contributed to the following0factors. Fist and foremost,compared with the high price of forign foreign cars, the economical price of domestic cars are more attractive to consumers in China. Another important reason is that Chinese cars producers are trying their best to reduce the technology gap by investment in innovation and research. This measure has got broad support from domestic consumers.

For some time in the future, Chinese auto brands are estimated to maintain a great

direction of development. It is suggested that government are particularly necessary for automobile producers to introduce applicable policies to improve competitiveness of producers.

三、考研英语作文批改

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原文：. Japanese and American car brands, from 2008 to 2009.There was a steep rise of about 7% in the market share of native brands, while that of Japanese brands declined noticeably by 10% from 35% to 25%. The figure for American brands remained almost constant, at 10% in both yea

批改：描述图表还是比较到位的，数据很清楚明确，句子结构合理，但是一些小错误注意避免哦。

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批改：空格，following factors

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批改：不太严谨，Chinese automobile manufactures

原文：al price of domestic cars are more attractive to consumers in China. Another important reason is that Chinese cars producers are trying their best to reduce the technology gap by investment in innovation and research. This measure has got broad support from domestic consumers.

批改：原因分析还是比较到位的，句子结构完整，但是错误比较多，表述有的不是很准确，注意修改。

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四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

语法：语法注意表述的完整性和准确性，谓语动词要注意哦，单数复数注意区分，can后面加动词原形，要注意加强记忆。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，也有写错的哦，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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