对于考研英语一而言，2024年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2024年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2024年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the main gains from labor exercise courses amang students in a certain university Learning relative knowledge takes the lead at 91.3%, followed by improving the ability of using hands at 84.8％. Additionally,factors such as enhancing cooperative ability and feeling good mood are also considered, accounting for 32.6% and 54.4%,respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to profit from labor practice courses.In addition，an increasing number of university students believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, the practice ablity is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the gains of university students from labor practice class ，serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：amang

批改：among

批改：加句号断句

原文：ar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the main gains from labor exercise courses amang students in a certain university Learning relative knowledge takes the lead at 91.3%, followed by improving the ability of using hands at 84.8％. Additionally,factors such as enhancing cooperative ability and feeling good mood are also considered, accounting for 32.6% and 54.4%,respectively.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：e core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to profit from labor practice courses.In addition，an increasing number of university students believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, the practice ablity is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：hat about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the gains of university students from labor practice class ，serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意正确使用标点断句；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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