据启航教育英语教研组统计，考研英语作文批改话题连续多年成为考研英语二大作文的高频考点。本文带来的2019年考研英语二批改例文中，考生通过对社会热点的精准分析与地道表达，获得高分，其写作思路可供2027考研英语二考生直接借鉴。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts graduates" choices in a university when 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the percentage of getting a job was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate substantially decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of postgradute experienced a significant increase of 7.7% during the same period. Meanwhile, the percentage of starting a business remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendows efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense job pressure, and a result, futher education has emerged as their significant choice. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of postgradute will steady increase in the following decade. In contrast, the proportion of getting a job will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：when

批改：in

原文：postgradute

批改：pursuing postgraduate studies

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts graduates" choices in a university when 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the percentage of getting a job was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate substantially decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of postgradute experienced a significant increase of 7.7% during the same period. Meanwhile, the percentage of starting a business remained stable and steady.

批改：较准确描述了图表内容

原文：tremendows

批改：tremendous

原文：a

批改：as a result

原文： futher

批改：further

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendows efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense job pressure, and a result, futher education has emerged as their significant choice. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：论点清晰，词汇和句法丰富

原文：postgradute

批改：pursuing postgraduate studies

原文： steady

批改：副词修饰动词steadily

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of postgradute will steady increase in the following decade. In contrast, the proportion of getting a job will likely continue to decrease.

批改：预测趋势，呼应主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15分。

1. 题目要求：作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2. 语言表达：运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3. 行文逻辑：采用恰当的衔接手法，行文流畅，内容连贯；

4. 建议：要深刻吃透老师的模板，背诵和灵活运用相结合，进一步丰富自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

复习考研英语大作文，务必要重视范文精读+专业批改的双向结合。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，专为冲刺阶段考生打造，从话题预测到写作模板一应俱全，是考研英语作文批改写作提分的可靠方案。