当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2019年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二真题话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the chosen by graduation in the certain university.In percentage of work was proximately 68.1%,but by 2018 the rate had gradually decreased to 60.7%.Meanwhile,the figure of further education had experienced a significant increase of 4% during the same period.Simultaneously,the percentage of create business remained steady and stable.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows .To start with,our government had made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system,enabling students have sample opportunities for further education.In addition,an increasing number of young generation believe that in the modern society,full of choice,challenge and chances,high education experience is indispensable if they wish to achieve a success in the long run.Considering these factors,the phenomenon on the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends?I am confident that the percentage of work will likely slow decrease in the following decades.In contrast,the figure of further education

will continue to significant increase in the future.Simultaneously the create business will remained stable and steady.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： chosen

批改：这里应该是名词词性，改为 choices

原文： in the certain university

批改：in+大地点， at +小地点，学校一般用 at 。某高校也不应该用特指的the，所以某高校 改为 at a certain university

原文：proximately

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 approximately

原文：In percentage of

批改：in percentage of 没有这种错误，改为 ​ The percentage of 为了使语意更完整，用分词做后置定语，用来修饰前面的students，改为 The percentage of students choosing to work was .....

原文： create

批改：介词后面跟动词的-ing形式，改为 creating business 创业的地道表达是 start a business，改为 starting a business

原文： reason

批改：下文不止一个原因，改为 reasons

原文： had

批改：用现在完成时更好，改为 has

原文：enabling students have

批改：动词的用法，“enable sb. to do sth. 改为 enabling students to have.....

原文：sample

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 ample

原文：,

批改：删除

原文： choice,challenge and chances

批改：and连接的三个词应该保持一致，都用复数，改为 choices, challenges and chances

原文：achieve a success

批改：achieve success 认为固定搭配的短语，不用加a

原文：slow

批改：修饰动词要变成副词，改为 slowly ，况且副词放在被修饰动词的后面，改为 decrease slowly ...

原文：significant

批改：同上，副词才能修饰动词，改为 significantly，放在被修饰词后面

原文：remained

批改：will后面跟动词原形，改为 remain

原文：the create business

批改：同上，改为 the percentage of starting a business will....

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9 /15

从结构层面看，本文脉络清晰，采用三段式写作，开头清楚表明图片，中间进行了分析，最后做出了总结；

从内容层面看，三种毕业去向的地道表达需要平时积累，第二段的内容详实，丰富具体；

从语言层面看，注意标点符号，单词拼写、语法错误；

建议：检查单词拼写，语法上：介词搭配、will /should/must/could/can后面跟动词原形，介词后面跟动词的ing形式，时态问题、and连接的内容要保持一致，另外多积累短语的固定用法，加油。

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