对于考研英语一而言，2014年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the populare change, botween urban people

and rural people. In 1990, the perentage of urban people is 30,000,000,

but by 2010, the number had gradually increase 36,000,000 in the period.

Meanwhile, the figure of rural people had experiented gradually slow dereased

from 1990 to 2010.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized

as follows. To start with, as the conductor, our goverment had made

tremandous effort to drive ecomic growth and elevate the purchaing power of the populare, allowing them can afford city houses that were previously deemed luxury items. In additan, an incresing number of

young people belive that in the modern socity full of changes, challenges

and chances, working in big city is indispensable if they with to

achieve sucess in the long run. Consideing these factors, the depacted

phenomenon in the table is unsuprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the figure of

urban people will steadily grow in the following deades. In contrast,

the number of rural people will likely continue to decrease in the following deades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：populare c

批改：populare 拼写错误，应为 population

原文：botween

批改：botween 拼写错误，应为 between

原文： perentage

批改：perentage 拼写错误，应为 population (此处描述的是具体人口数，而非百分比)。

原文： people is 30,000,0

批改：is 30,000,000：描述1990年的数据，时态应用过去式 was。同时，数据单位错误，根据图表应为 300 million (3亿)。

原文：ad gradually increase

批改：had gradually increase：时态错误，过去完成时后应接过去分词 increased。

原文： experiented gradually slow dere

批改：experiented gradually slow dereased：多个错误。experiented 拼写错误，应为 experienced；slow 形容词误用，应为副词 slowly；dereased 拼写错误，应为 decreased。

原文：he bar chart clearly depicts the populare change, botween urban people and rural people. In 1990, the perentage of urban people is 30,000,000, but by 2010, the number had gradually increase 36,000,000 in the period. Meanwhile, the figure of rural people had experiented gradually slow dereased from 1990 to 2010.

批改：你准确地描述了城乡人口一升一降的核心趋势，内容要点是完整的。但本段在数据准确性、时态一致性和词汇拼写上存在较多问题，这严重影响了描述的严谨性和专业性。图表描述段是门面，确保数据和时态的绝对正确至关重要。

原文：goverment had made tremandous

批改：goverment 拼写错误，应为 government。 tremandous 拼写错误，应为 tremendous。

原文： ecom

批改：ecomic 拼写错误，应为 economic。

原文：purchaing

批改：purchaing 拼写错误，应为 purchasing。

原文：populare, allo

批改：populare again，应为 populace 或 people。

原文：wing them

批改：allowing them can afford：语法错误，allowing 后应接宾语+不定式，即 allowing them to afford。

原文： additan, an incresing

批改：additan 拼写错误，应为 addition。 incresing 拼写错误，应为 increasing。

原文：e belive that in the modern socity

批改：belive 拼写错误，应为 believe。 socity 拼写错误，应为 society。

原文： with to achieve sucess in t

批改：with 用词错误，应为 wish。 sucess 拼写错误，应为 success。

原文：Consideing these factors, the depacted phenomenon in the table is unsuprisin

批改：Consideing 拼写错误，应为 Considering。 depacted 拼写错误，应为 depicted。

原文： core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor, our goverment had made tremandous effort to drive ecomic growth and elevate the purchaing power of the populare, allowing them can afford city houses that were previously deemed luxury items. In additan, an incresing number of young people belive that in the modern socity full of changes, challenges and chances, working in big city is indispensable if they with to achieve sucess in the long run. Consideing these factors, the depacted phenomenon in the table is unsuprising. What about future trends? I"m confident that the figure of

批改：本段的论证角度非常出色！你从“政府驱动经济发展”和“年轻人追求城市机会”两个层面来分析城镇化原因，逻辑清晰且切中要害，这是很大的亮点。然而，密集的拼写错误和个别语法错误，使得原本出色的论点被大打折扣，非常可惜。

原文：ng deades

批改：deades 拼写错误，应为 decades。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7分

你的这篇作文在内容构思和论证逻辑上其实相当不错，尤其是第二段的原因分析，角度精准，思路清晰，这证明了你的思考能力。但是，频繁且基础的拼写错误已经成为你当前最大的失分项，它严重阻碍了你获得一个与你真实思考水平相匹配的分数。

你的问题非常明确，解决方案也需要高度聚焦。

给你的核心提升建议：

当前首要任务：攻克拼写，立即开始一项专项训练：建立个人高频拼错词库。将你在这篇作文中反复拼错的词（如government, economic, population, society, success, decades等）全部列出来，每天花15-20分钟反复背诵和默写。

实施“检查法”：在完成作文后，强制自己留出至少5分钟，不做任何修改，只做一件事：逐词逐句地检查拼写。想象自己是一个校对员，目标就是找出并消灭所有拼写错误。

巩固基础语法：同时，复习一般过去时、过去完成时等基本时态，以及动词不定式的用法（allow sb. to do sth.）。

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