2014年考研英语二大作文是考研英语作文模板备考清单中的必练题型。本文带来的高分批改范例，配套启航教育老师的逐句批注与预测话题标签，适合考研英语考生在冲刺阶段精读精练，是一套完整的写作提升资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of urban and rural population in China from 1990 to 2010.In 1990 ,the number of urban population was 300 millions,but by 2010,this figure had substantially risen to 660 millions .In contrast ,the number of rural population experienced slow decline of 60 millions during the same period

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summaried as follows. To start with,increasing number of young people modern society full of chance ,challenges and chances,urban life is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.In addition,Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation.Iny view,the fundamental reason of this phenomena is the development of the urarn ereas andThe backwardness of rural ereas.Considering these factors the depicted 9phenomena chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends?I am confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decade.In contrast, the number of the proportion of rural population will likely to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：millions

批改：改成million，数字加million，用单数

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：60

批改：应该是160

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the change of urban and rural population in China from 1990 to 2010.In 1990 ,the number of urban population was 300 millions,but by 2010,this figure had substantially risen to 660 millions .In contrast ,the number of rural population experienced slow decline of 60 millions during the same period

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：summaried

批改：summarized

原文：increasing

批改：前加an

批改：内容不全，加上：believe that in....

原文：chance

批改：changes

原文：Iny

批改：In my

原文：phenomena

批改：phenomenon

原文：ereas

批改：areas

原文：ereas

批改：areas

原文：9phenomena

批改：phenomenon

原文：chart

批改：in the chart

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summaried as follows. To start with,increasing number of young people modern society full of chance ,challenges and chances,urban life is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.In addition,Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation.Iny view,the fundamental reason of this phenomena is the development of the urarn ereas andThe backwardness of rural ereas.Considering these factors the depicted 9phenomena chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：What about future trends?I am confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decade.In contrast, the number of the proportion of rural population will likely to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式和语法方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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