对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2011年大作文题目

考研英语一2011年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2011年大作文批改例文

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As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists, sitting on the broad and enjoying the scenery, which throw the rubbish environment that damages the economy of river. Evidently, the cartoanist environmental intends to convey to readers that pollution is an issue that requires great atten both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and fore-most, tragically, although the lack of clear rules and regulation might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lives in the fact that some individuals, in their persuit of economy interests, have disregarded the virtue of protecting environmen What is more, neglecting environment is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress. Not only hindering its ability to maintain healty and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its international image

How can we put an end to the problem of environmental pollution? It is suggested by many that we need a pack-age deal, including enhancing supervision and streng thening moral education. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to do somethings. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：broad

批改：boat

原文：which

批改：人扔的垃圾，用who引导从句

原文：environment that damages the economy of river.

批改：who throw rubbish into the river that harms the its ecological balance​

原文：cartoanist

批改： ​​cartoonist​​

原文：environmental

批改：删除

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists, sitting on the broad and enjoying the scenery, which throw the rubbish environment that damages the economy of river. Evidently, the cartoanist environmental intends to convey to readers that pollution is an issue that requires great atten both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：意思没问题，注意拼写和语法错误，

原文：great atten

批改：great attention

原文：fore-most,

批改：​​foremost

原文：regulation

批改：​​regulations​

原文：persuit of economy

批改：pursuit​​ of ​​economic​​ interests

原文：lives

批改：lies

原文： environmen

批改：environment​，加句号

原文： Not

批改：用逗号，not小写，和前面那句内容是连在一起的

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and fore-most, tragically, although the lack of clear rules and regulation might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lives in the fact that some individuals, in their persuit of economy interests, have disregarded the virtue of protecting environmen What is more, neglecting environment is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress. Not only hindering its ability to maintain healty and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its international image

批改：注意拼写错误。

原文： pack-age

批改：package

原文：streng thening

批改：​​strengthening​​

原文：somethings

批改：单数something

原文：How can we put an end to the problem of environmental pollution? It is suggested by many that we need a pack-age deal, including enhancing supervision and streng thening moral education. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to do somethings. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/20分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，拼写、单复数是主要扣分原因；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，强调句，非谓语结构和主语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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